Day 5: Write the same poem, both with and without punctuation and compare the two. I’ve always been a fan of letting the words fall on the reader’s heart at will, so I think I prefer the unpunctuated. What do you think?
Strings unwind without a doubt to hold them in place.
Uncurled and unfurled.
Twisting in reverse.
Pieced together and separated again.
Lacing up hearts is hard work with these broken strings.
Strings unwind
Without a doubt
To hold them in place
Uncurled and unfurled
Twisting in reverse
Pieced
Together and separated
Again
Lacing up hearts
Is hard work
With these broken strings